Re: The ‘Nirvana’ Roleplay

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:10 am

Cursed wrote:The startled Even tripped and fell flat on his face.
Evan more Flustered, he gets up, “oh - uh - hi...Cap”

( Evan more flustered, Even... XD GRAMMAR )

(I did that on purpose)

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:15 am

*Captain startles awake* “Huh!? What happened? Why does it smell like something’s burning, and where’s my flask?

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:16 am

"Seems she's having a bit of a dilemma," Alexis says, flicking the captains forehead. "Hellooo! Captain Evelyn! Even is going to burn down the ship!"

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:16 am

Chase huffed, putting a hand on her shoulder, “Even accidentally burnt somethin’. Your flask is empty in your front pocket.” He shook his head, “And before you ask, no, none of us are refillin’ it for you.” His green eyes flickered towards the others. “Alexis, he isn’t burnin’ down the ship.” He chuckled, “Overreactin’ probably isn’t wise, kid.”

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:17 am

Even looked down, repeatedly saying Sorry under his breath.
He dropped his wrench. Again.

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:18 am

(Ok to establish the order because I’m confused, I believe it’s justice, me, Landon then jack. My fault sorry. Unless it’s adressed to a specific character.)

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:18 am

bellechymes wrote:(Ok to establish the order because I’m confused, I believe it’s justice, me, Landon then jack. My fault sorry. Unless it’s adressed to a specific character.)

( AGREED )

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:20 am

“Ugh, fine. Alexis, go help Even repair that motivator. Chase, watch for authorities. I’ll continue charting our corse.”

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:22 am

Chase gave Evelyn a two-fingered salute, “Got it, Cap. I’ll continue flyin’, I suppose.” He plopped down in his chair, spinning around and facing the glowing controls.

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:22 am

(How about we put in parenthesis the character we're addressing or who is next, yeah?)
(please)

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:23 am

( eh.. if we’re not adressing a specific character then no parenthesis. If we are, then yes )

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:23 am

"Alrighty then. Come on, human torch." Alexis says with annoyance. "We have a fire to put out."

( To Even )

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:24 am

(I don’t think we need an order, it makes things more interesting, but addressing people can be done with parentheses or asterisks)

(We need an order. Trust me. Please)

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:24 am

“O-okay” Even continually stumbles and trips while being dragged towards the kitchen

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:25 am

Admin wrote:(I don’t think we need an order, it makes things more interesting, but addressing people can be done with parentheses of asterisks)

( do this:

Your Character’s Name - Who are they talking to
Response

Example:

Chase - To Captain
Chase ate a chocolate bar... )

Order is
Justice - Belle - Landon - Jack.

If we are only having two characters communicating, quote the person you are replying too. )

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:27 am

flameinthetardis wrote:

Admin wrote:(I don’t think we need an order, it makes things more interesting, but addressing people can be done with parentheses of asterisks)

( do this:

Your Character’s Name - Who are they talking to
Response

Example:

Chase - To Captain
Chase ate a chocolate bar... )

Order is
Justice - Belle - Landon - Jack.

If we are only having two characters communicating, quote the person you are replying too. )

(Kewl ok)

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:30 am

Evelyn - To Chase

“Well this is odd. It seems there’s a glitch in the cartography system. Our destination at Cucury has just... disappeared. Is your comm tablet saying anything different?”

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:32 am

Admin wrote:Evelyn - To Chase

“Well this is odd. It seems there’s a glitch in the cartography system. Our destination at Cucury has just... disappeared. Is your comm tablet saying anything different?”

Chase - to Evelyn
Chase frowned, grabbing his tablet and looking down at it, “Huh. It’s gone on here too.” He pressed a few more buttons, “Odd.” He hummed, green eyes narrowed.

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:35 am

Chase - to Evelyn
Chase frowned, grabbing his tablet and looking down at it, “Huh. It’s gone on here too.” He pressed a few more buttons, “Odd.” He hummed, green eyes narrowed. [/quote]

Evelyn - To Chase
It’s probably nothing. Once we get that motivator back up we’ll be able to warp over there. Now were just waiting on those two.

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:35 am

Alexis - to Even

After the two had made their way back to the kitchen, Alexis is greeted with the heat of a fully fledged fire. "What the hell, Even!" She immediately pushes the young engineer to the side, searching for the ship's emergency fire extinguisher. Once she finds it, she rips it off the wall and immediately begins putting out the fire.

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:39 am

Cursed wrote:

bellechymes wrote:Alexis - to Even

After the two had made their way back to the kitchen, Alexis is greeted with the heat of a fully fledged fire. "What the hell, Even!" She immediately pushes the young engineer to the side, searching for the ship's emergency fire extinguisher. Once she finds it, she rips it off the wall and immediately begins putting out the fire.

Even to Alexis
“I was trying to make dinner” Even slumped over “the microwave said no. the chicken nuggets are burned”

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:40 am

Admin wrote:Chase - to Evelyn
Chase frowned, grabbing his tablet and looking down at it, “Huh. It’s gone on here too.” He pressed a few more buttons, “Odd.” He hummed, green eyes narrowed.

Evelyn - To Chase
It’s probably nothing. Once we get that motivator back up we’ll be able to warp over there. Now were just waiting on those two.[/quote]

Chase - to Evelyn
Chase chuckled, rolling his eyes, “Meanwhile, you can sober up, Cap.” He suggested, a smirk crawling across him lips.

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:45 am

Cursed wrote:

Cursed wrote:

bellechymes wrote:Alexis - to Even

After the two had made their way back to the kitchen, Alexis is greeted with the heat of a fully fledged fire. "What the hell, Even!" She immediately pushes the young engineer to the side, searching for the ship's emergency fire extinguisher. Once she finds it, she rips it off the wall and immediately begins putting out the fire.

Even to Alexis
“I was trying to make dinner” Even slumped over “the microwave said no. the chicken nuggets are burned”

Alexis to Even
"Even though I applaud you for attempting to make chicken nuggets, because nuggets are a holy and pure non living form, you are still cleaning this all up." Alexis raises the barrel of the fire extinguishers. "Or I’ll shoot."

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:48 am

bellechymes wrote:Alexis to Even
"Even though I applaud you for attempting to make chicken nuggets, because nuggets are a holy and pure non living form, you are still cleaning this all up." Alexis raises the barrel of the fire extinguishers. "Or I’ll shoot."

Even to Alexis
“fair enough. Fine-fine-fine” Even begins trying to remove the spot and ash from.....everything

Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:59 am

Cursed wrote: Even to Alexis
“fair enough. Fine-fine-fine” Even begins trying to remove the spot and ash from.....everything

Alexis to Even
"You are unqualified to make chicken nuggets," Alexis says, grasping a mop in her hand and handing it to Even. "You’re unqualified to do...everything, actually." Immediately once she finishes her sentence, the lights begin to flicker until they blink out.

"Oh. Fantastic."